Stripping away the rose colored glasses of denial concerning my reality. Getting in touch with truth. Reaching out to others in empathy concerning their reality and their walk to truth.

Saturday, October 25, 2014

Look - No Tears



















I will always hear the train,
the tracks abandoned long ago.
And the day you said goodbye
was the day I let you go.

Off you went into the mist,
and the leaves began to change.
It's as if the world sped up
with desire to rearrange.

12 comments:

  1. I agree Debra - thanks for visiting!

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  2. I always love your rhymes, Dixie! And the lyrical simplicity of the lines without the need to overdo it!

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  3. Dezmond - that's quite the compliment, sir. I so enjoy your posts as well.

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  4. That was nice, sometimes we have to let go ... of all sorts of things.

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  5. I (used to) struggle writing poetry. Now, I pretty much just don't. However, that doesn't mean I don't enjoy reading it. I really liked this one. Good job!

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    1. I used to think it had to be long to mean something. Not true and I really enjoy keeping them simple. Thank you very much for your compliment!

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  6. Lovely poem...beautiful photograph.

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    1. Thank you so much for the compliment!
      I just realized you have three blogs; I'll stop over on the two I haven't visited yet. Take care.

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  7. Sometimes our life, changes just like the seasons...
    Lovely write...

    peace and love
    1ManView

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    1. Very true, and I thank you for the kind compliment, sir.

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