Lovely! Wish the last two lines had rhymes too :) I do love me rhymes!
Just for you - an alternate ending:You are wisdom - she whispered to the bird.He not understanding a single word - blinked his eyes and looked above.Feeling the warmth of her breath meant love.Alrighty then...
There you go! That one goes to the publishers :) It will sell in millions!
Promises, promises!! You market it - send me a check!
Lovely! No need to rhyme in this day and age.
A wise bird.
Both versions: fantastic!
Thank you Robin!!
Thank you Janie!!!
I'm the same about rhymes I'm afraid. However, I did love the poem and especially the picture.
Ironically I'm not a poet. Something comes to mind, and I write the thought down the way it is presented. There are times I can force a rhyme and hope it comes out right; mostly I play.I'm very glad you enjoyed this post - thank you for visiting me.
Mr. Shadow - from you that is a huge compliment! Thank you very much.
Thank you for visiting me. Want to add your thoughts?