Wednesday, October 22, 2014

Your basic - Blue Hollow Nightmare



















You enticed me blue hollow.
You bade me to follow.
I followed
and fumbled,
and now left to wallow.

In the trees I heard a cry.
Not a wail of a sigh.
Not a moan
or a groan,
but a voice pleading, why?

Whispers and chains do rattle.
Thoughts in my head do battle.
I will flee
far from thee,
let that spider eat cattle.

Tada.
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10 comments:

  1. DEZMONDOctober 23, 2014 at 1:36 PM

    an epic ending LOL

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  2. Dixie@dcreliefOctober 23, 2014 at 4:38 PM

    Thank you Dezmond, sir.

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  3. billy pilgrimOctober 23, 2014 at 9:05 PM

    that's what i like, a nice small easy to read post that flows very smoothly.

    that's either a pretty big spider or a pretty small cow/bull.

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  4. ShadowOctober 24, 2014 at 3:49 AM

    We follow what calls, not always what we should, but how would be know if we did not....

    Thanks for your visit, I appreciate it!

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  5. petronelaOctober 24, 2014 at 4:24 AM

    It sounds lovely and it does suit the imagery. You're very talented :).

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  6. Dixie@dcreliefOctober 24, 2014 at 8:15 AM

    Thanks Billy - quite the compliment from one of my favorite writers!

    Oh Yes! Big spider!

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  7. Dixie@dcreliefOctober 24, 2014 at 8:16 AM

    Shadow - wow - loved visiting! Great stuff at your home! And yes, we often follow some crazy stuff. Thanks for visiting here!

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  8. Dixie@dcreliefOctober 24, 2014 at 8:19 AM

    Petronela - so happy to hear "It's a boy!" I'm humbled by your compliment, and grateful you visited today. Thank you!

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  9. AnonymousOctober 24, 2014 at 3:33 PM

    Love it !!
    L.R.

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  10. Dixie@dcreliefOctober 24, 2014 at 5:33 PM

    Hi LR - good to hear from you! Told ya it was a surprise ending. Thanks for visiting me. :)

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