Saturday, October 25, 2014

Look - No Tears



















I will always hear the train,
the tracks abandoned long ago.
And the day you said goodbye
was the day I let you go.

Off you went into the mist,
and the leaves began to change.
It's as if the world sped up
with desire to rearrange.

12 comments:

  1. I agree Debra - thanks for visiting!

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  2. I always love your rhymes, Dixie! And the lyrical simplicity of the lines without the need to overdo it!

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  3. Dezmond - that's quite the compliment, sir. I so enjoy your posts as well.

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  4. That was nice, sometimes we have to let go ... of all sorts of things.

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  5. I (used to) struggle writing poetry. Now, I pretty much just don't. However, that doesn't mean I don't enjoy reading it. I really liked this one. Good job!

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    1. I used to think it had to be long to mean something. Not true and I really enjoy keeping them simple. Thank you very much for your compliment!

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  6. Lovely poem...beautiful photograph.

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    1. Thank you so much for the compliment!
      I just realized you have three blogs; I'll stop over on the two I haven't visited yet. Take care.

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  7. Sometimes our life, changes just like the seasons...
    Lovely write...

    peace and love
    1ManView

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    1. Very true, and I thank you for the kind compliment, sir.

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