Sunday, February 8, 2009

Rising



Often I do not see the progress I’ve made
‘Till more thoughts are answered from life in the shade
I don’t know why I’ve forgotten the sun
And all of its strength that gives me great fun

The shore washes clean from the sea foam at play
The sun takes a dip and has gone its own way
Tall rocks appear daunting but soften in light
Of the full moon that’s rising on my thoughts tonight

2 comments:

  1. And beyond the shade is the glorious sun. The shaded thoughts are lessons that can teach us that it is always darkest before the dawn.
    Positive energy, I send to you.

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  2. A new comment here: I like your thought that would seem to end the piece; the blog. Also, thank you so much for the positive energy!

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